| Dear Li Ming I’m sorry to hear that you are not getting along well with the students in the new school. So I’d like to give you some tips. First, be as confident as you can. There’s nothing that attracts people more than someone who has a fairly positive attitude to wards life ,Next, make eye contact with others ,smile at them when they look at you ,and laugh when they say something that’s funny, it makes you seem friendly. Third, invite others to do things together, For example, you can ask them to do small talk. It’s better to develop and share your interest with them. Last but not least ,don’t be too hard on yourself .Making new friends takes a lot of time and effort You should be patient. Best wishes and good luck! Yours, Zhang Hua |
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