One
possible
version:
On-line
friend(s)
Recently
,people
have
had
a
heated
discussion
about
whether
students
should
make
friends
on-line.
Different
people
hold
different
opinions.
Some
of
them
agree
with
the
opinion
.
The
reasons
are
as
follows:
first,
we
can
make
more
friends
with
others
on
the
Internet.
Second,
We
can
express
our
ideas
freely.
Besides,
making
friends
on
line
can
contribute
to
learning
English.
However,
others
are
against
the
opinion
.The
reason
why
they
disagree
is
that
they
think
it
is
a
waste
of
time
to
make
friends
on
line
and
has
a
bad
effect
on
study.
What’s
more,
students
are
likely
to
be
cheated
on
line
.
Each
coin
has
its
two
sides
.In
my
opinion,
making
friends
on
line
is
good
for
us
because
it
is
very
convenient
and
can
widen
our
horizon.
All
the
best
,
Yours，
Li
Hua
答案解析試題分析：這是壹篇議論文，第壹段贊同學生網上交友的人的觀點，第二段是反對學生網上交友觀點，第三段是表述作者自己的觀點。第壹段陳述贊同的理由時作者用了Firstly,
Secondly,
they
can
express
their
feelings
Besides,來連接，是文章有層次，並且很流暢。第二段是反對的人的觀點和他們的理由，作者沒有重復第二段的方法而是用了
in
addition來過渡。第三段是作者自己的觀點，範文中用In
my
opinion/
From
my
point
of
view來表達自己的觀點，觀點明確，還有自己的令人信服的理由。壹篇好的作文要做到：要點要全，表達要清晰明確，使用短語，句型要準確，註意避免拼寫和語法錯誤，熟練運用好的詞組。例如as
follows、
a
waste
of
time
get
cheated、
As
for
friendship
和widens
our
eyes
and
enriches
our
knowledge.都用了我們學過的重點短語，另外這篇文章裏的好句型也是亮點，例如：chatting
on
line
is
also
helpful
for
our
language
study.
/They
say
making
friends
on
line
is
a
waste
of
time,
which
should
be
spent
more
meaningfully/
Only
in
this
way
can
making
online
friends
be
valuable
to
us.熟練正確的使用這些句型能體現考生的水平，也會給自己的文章加分。
考點：考查議論文
點評：這類作文的寫作方法要註意認真審題，可以分三段寫：贊成；反對；妳的看法。註意過渡性語言的使用。做到：要點要全，表達要清晰明確，使用短語，句型要準確，註意避免拼寫和語法錯誤，熟練運用好的詞組。