古詩詞大全網 - 成語解釋 - 假如妳叫王芳,最近在網上交了壹位來自英國的筆友Mary,請根據以下要點給Mary寫壹封不少於100詞的e-mail

假如妳叫王芳,最近在網上交了壹位來自英國的筆友Mary,請根據以下要點給Mary寫壹封不少於100詞的e-mail

Dear Mary,

I am Wang Fang, a middle school student in Jiangyan, and I am 15 years old now. I am Gemini, so I am curious about everything. I like reading, traveling and making friends. I enjoy a lot communicating with others.

My favourite colour is red because red is a kind of strong colour. It represents power and strong feelings.

I’m interested in English, too. I can sing lots of English songs. And I think writing to you in English will help me a lot in learning English. By the way, my classmates want to make pen-friends with foreigners, too. I hope you can help them.

I hope I can study in Britain later. If I have a chance to your country, I hope to meet you.

Hope to hear from you soon.

Yours,

Wang Fang

試題分析: 這是壹篇應用文寫作,寫壹封電子郵件。給出的材料比較全面,我們所要做的首先是應用正確的英語句子把這些內容表達出來,在此基礎上亦可適當發揮,註意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點。寫作前先結合要表達的事情確定句子的人稱時態,註意標點符號及大小寫等問題,不要犯語法錯誤。註意上下文之間的邏輯關系,語意連貫。

點評:註意寫作中的時態、人稱和數的問題,時態壹般是壹般現在時態,人稱是第壹人稱較多。寫作中語言要準確、簡明,說明有條理,符合邏輯。