On Oct 1st, the National Day of China this year, dad, mom and I went to Beijing to have a vacation. I was so happy because it's the first time that I visit the Great Wall.
The Great Wall, one of the greatest wonders of the world.We took the bus to arrive at the foot of the Great Wall. I began to climb the dreamed Great Wall. At first I did not feel tired, but after I stepped a thousands of steps I felt tired and thirsty. At last, we stood on the highest point of the Great Wall. A Chinese saying goes like that, “you are not a real hero until you have climbed the Great Wall”. The view outside and inside the Great Wall was so beautiful in this autumn!What a wonder today!
訪問北京
今年在10月1日中國國慶日，爸爸媽媽和我到北京旅行。我非常高興，因為這是我第壹次參觀長城。
長城，是世界上最偉大的奇跡之壹。我們是乘坐公***汽車到達了長城腳下。有那麽多人到過這裏。起初我並沒有感到疲倦，但在我走了數千步後我感到又累又渴。最後，我們站在長城的最高點。中國有句諺語“不到長城非好漢”。在今年秋天長城內外景觀是如此美麗！多棒的壹天啊！
（2）National day was coming . i had seven days of holiday. our family had a vacation in beijing. it was a beautiful city. we stayed in a week. the hotel we lived in was very beautiful.we enjoyed the special coffee and listen to the popular music. we learned the people's lives and the custom there.we liked the beautiful view there !we more liked people there because they are friendly! i enjoyed myself. if i have the another chance, i would like to come.
國慶節來了，我有七天的假期。我們全家去北京度假，那是壹個美麗的城市。我們在那裏待上壹個星期。我們住的旅館很漂亮，我們享受可口的咖啡，聽著流行音樂，我們了解了那兒人們的生活和習俗。我們喜歡那裏美麗的風景，我喜歡那兒的人，因為他們和友好！我玩的很開心！如果還有機會，我還要來！
(3)In National Days,I went to the beach with my parents.The sun was so shining and the sea was so beautiful.I was so excited that I ran into the sea as soon as we reached.Although it was in October,the water was also so warm in the sea.I felt very pleasent because I had not go out to swim for a long time.when I swam into the place that far from the beach my parents shouted that it was very dangerous.So I swim to the deep sea.but it is also interesting I was happy in that day.
在國慶節，我和我的父母去了沙灘，陽光很明亮，大海很美麗。當我到那兒時，我激動得跑向大海。雖然是十月，但是海水依然很溫暖，我感覺很舒服，因為我不曾在水裏遊這麽久。當我遊向大海，我的父母大喊說那很危險，所以我在淺海中遊泳,但也很有趣。那天我玩得很開心
（4）I played cards with my classmates and I lost. So we went out to have luch together. Of course it was my treat. After luch we walked around the street. There were thousands of people in the street and there were beautiful decoration in the street. Then we walked into a large shop. We bought some books there. We really had a good time that day.
我和我的同學壹起打牌,我輸了。所以我們壹起出去吃午飯。當然是我請客。午飯後我們走在街上。路上有許許多多的人,有美麗的裝飾。然後我們走進壹個大商店。我們買了壹些書籍。我們真的玩得很開心的那壹天。
(5)National Day is coming.I like traveling very much. I want to travel all over the world. Because I think traveling is quite interesting. At the same time， we can watch beautiful scenery. It also can open our eyes.
If I have the chance， I want to go to Beijing first，because it's our capital. There are many famous places of interest to go， such as the Great Wall，Tian‘anmen Square， Beihai Park and so on. I'll take many photos，because they will help me remember the trip forever. We know the Olympic Games has been held in Beijing . All people in Beijing have being trying their best to make beijing more beautiful. I hope I can watch the best beautiful beijing. I will go there by train. I think traveling by train is far more comfortable and cheaper國慶節快到了。我非常喜歡旅遊。我想要環遊世界。因為我認為旅遊是相當有趣的。與此同時,我們還能看到美麗的風景。它也可以打開我們的眼睛。
如果我有機會的話,我想去北京的第壹,因為它是我們的首都。有許多著名的名勝古跡去,例如長城、天安門廣場,北海公園等等。我要帶許多照片,因為他們將幫助我記住這次旅行,直到永遠。我們知道奧運會已經在北京舉行。所有的人都在北京正在盡最大的努力使北京更加美麗。我希望我能看最好的北京。我要乘火車去那兒。我想坐火車旅行遠更舒適、更便宜
希望滿意，祝妳快樂（自己挑吧）