Good morning, everyone!
The topic of my speech is”How to make friends”.
Everyone needs friends, so how to make real friends is very important to everyone. To make friends, you must be friendly to others. Smile at someone and you are almost sure to get a smile in return. You should do you best to make a stranger feel at home, no matter where he happens to be. Put yourself in the other’s position and make him feel te is welcome. Besides, you should care more for others than for yourself.
When you don’t agree with people on certain matters, don’t argue but discuss with them. However, don’t believe in those who always betray their friend in trouble, because ‘A friend in need is a friend indeed’.
In my opinion, it is necessary to try to remember others’name,which will impress them. Never look down upon these who are poor. In a word, you should treasure the friendship between you and your friends, which is of great importance to keep up the friendship.
Thank you for listening.
試題分析：演講稿的主題部分應該闡述清楚事情的緣由、結果和要求。第壹部分的內容應該以詳細完整地介紹事情為主，具體地講，包括事情的發生、發展及結局。第二部分的內容應該提出個人看法等。發言稿以簡單句為主要的表達形式。同時，演講稿的語言必須有感染力，所以演講稿可以使用祈使句、感嘆句、強調句等句式來達到這種目的。寫作時要註意適當地使用關聯詞承前啟後，用詞要得體，符合語言環境。
點評：選詞造句，避難選易。在要點、層次明確的情況下，選用自己最熟悉的單詞或句式來表達．如果不會用復雜句就用簡單句表達要點．註意主謂語壹致、人稱、數量、大小寫、標點。完成後要認真檢查，避免錯誤。仔細閱讀全文，查找是否有錯，註意時態、單詞拼寫、字母大小寫、標點是否有誤，句式是否正確．邏輯是否壹致。