寫作思路：要直接簡化任務語言。在敘述中，我們要把直接敘述變成間接敘述，盡可能簡化人物語言。這樣，即使情節連貫，又使語句“簡練”。
When talk about the sport, I will feel very excited, because I like sport so much, I love playing tennis, it is my favorite sport. I remember one day when I came home after school, I opened the TV and watched a tennis match.
At first, I was caught by the beautiful tennis women players, they wore the beautiful outfits, when I had been watching for ten minutes, I found the match was so excellent, from then on, I started to watch tennis match.
I have learned the tennis, I will call my friends to play with me when I have time. Now I am a big fan of the tennis match, I will watch the tour matches once I am free. My love to tennis is more than I could express, I am so lucky to have some friends who share the same interest with me.
當談到運動的時候，我會感到很興奮，因為我很喜歡運動，我喜歡打網球，這是我最喜歡的運動。我記得有壹天當我放學回家後，我打開了電視機，看到了壹場網球比賽。剛開始，我被美麗的女選手吸引，她們穿著美麗的球服，看了十分鐘以後，我發現比賽很好看，從那時候起，我開始看網球比賽。
我已經學習了網球，我會在有空的時候叫上朋友，壹起打網球。如今我是壹名網球的超級粉絲，我會在有空的時候看網球巡回賽。我對網球的愛無法用言語表達，我很幸運能有和我壹樣對網球有幸福的夥伴。