我們先以壹道考研英語真題為例:“愛心是壹盞燈,在越黑暗的地方越明亮”的寫作題目中,範文的結束段是這樣來進行的:
It is my view that the best way to show love is to help people who are more unfortunate than we are. We should always be ready to give a helping hand to those who are in trouble, no matter whether they are family members or complete strangers. Only by doing so can we help to make the world a better place, for, as the picture shows, the darker the shadows of sorrow become, the more brightly the lamp of love shines.
這是作文的第三段。在這個段落中,作者在此明確了自己的觀點:表示愛心的方式是幫助比我們更加不幸的人。同時作者又給出了自己的建議,希望每個人都隨時準備向有困難的人伸出援助之手。
上面的例子是壹個關於正面的話題,這是圍繞“愛心”展開的。因此,在這壹段中,首先需要去弘揚這種美德,或者現象。在第三段的第壹句,重申論點是非常有必要的。例如這句話“It is my view that the best way to show love is to help people who are more unfortunate than we are”,為了使我們的社會更加美好,這樣積極正面的例子是我們每壹個人都要效仿並學習的。在第三段的第二句中,需要表明“當前社會的確很需要這種正能量或者這種積極正面的行為”。正如第壹個例子中的這句話“we should always be ready to give a helping hand to those who are in trouble, no matter whether they are family members or complete strangers”,範文中再次表明社會中的每個人都應該隨時做好準備去幫助其他人。無論是作為我們的家人,還是陌生人,我們都不應該見他人有難而視而不見。在第三段的第三句中,文章應該“對未來的憧憬或者期待”進行表述。例如,“Only by doing so can we help to make the world a better place, for, as the picture shows, the darker the shadows of sorrow become, the more brightly the lamp of love shines”,針對這種正面行為或現象,如果壹直保持著這種正能量,社會將會變得更美好,愛心的光將照亮悲傷的陰影。
下面給大家總結壹下積極正向文章整體的寫作思路。
正向文章行文思路 (積極倡導):
( Confidence ) is partially the driving force behind the evolution/growth of our society. And all hands are supposed to join together to (foster people’s confidence).
1、社會層面
(1)媒體傳遞正能量media
The mass media should exert more positive energy, such as being confidence, to the public so that people would react more positively to difficulties and adversities.
(2)教育education
Education, affects people’s attitude and reaction to the world. Thus, moral education should be enhanced and concentrated on juveniles and kids before they enter their adulthood. Specifically, self-discipline and code of social conduct should be written in books and carefully discussed in class.
(3)學校college
College is where undergraduates obtain knowledge and skills to enhance their academic performance and where students get their personality and code of social conduct improved as well. Thus, moral course of moral education should be provided as elective curriculums to college students.
curriculum 校內課程
extra curriculum課外活動
electives n選修課 elective curriculums
2、個人層面
(1)改善自我
①Reading books. We can devote some of our leisure to cultivating a love of reading books. You will find what you cannot get in reality but in books, such as companion, answers to tough questions, etiquette as well as mental power etc.
such as +N/doing
for example,+句子
②Exercising. Polls conducted online says, taking part into sports would improve your mentality, personality and strengthen your weak point. Your will find yourself more assertive and decisive after one year of group exercising.
find oneself +adj
find oneself +doing sth
③+給予他們時間成長Of course, we cannot grow to be (a confident person) overnight if we were not, therefore, we should allow ourselves to take baby steps to learn it.
(2)誌願工作voluntary work
It is highly recommended that people should participate in voluntary work. During the process, you would get your mind purified, moral consciousness boosted, and social responsibilities strengthened. You would like to join hands with your peers or colleagues to proceed with your task.
以上是給大家總結的大作文第三段的寫作思路,大家也需要不間斷的訓練和積累素材。在這裏提前祝大家金榜題名