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請求幫忙修改壹篇6級考試英語作文

The way to success

There is a famous remark said by Abraham Lincoln,"Give me six hours to chop down a tree,and I will spend the the first four sharpeing the axe."Simple it is,what the picture conveys to us is thought-provoking.All of us want to acheive success,but here comes a question, how to do it? The answer is different,Lincoln'words is helpful for us to have a deep thingking.

In china,the students must be studing ten years and we can take part in the final exam in this ten years we can have a good fundation,only in this way can we pass the eaxm.It's impossible for everybody to achieve success in an easier way,we must work harder and harder,improve our ability and skills,then we can beat others in competiton.Why Lincoln spend so many time to sharpeing the axe? Because the clearly dumd know the former preperation is the mostly important.

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