假設妳是李華，作為選派的交流學生在美國某中學學習了壹年，寄住在Mr. Brown家裏，剛回到國內。回國後，妳發現自己的壹本英語詞典遺忘在他家，因此給他寫了壹封信，請他幫助寄回詞典。信的主要內容如下：
感謝在美國期間他所提供的幫助
壹本英語詞典忘記帶回
詞典是美國老師送的，非常珍貴
詞典很可能丟在臥室的書架上
郵資自己付
註意：
1、詞數100左右;信的開頭和結尾已為妳寫好。
2、可適當增加細節，使行文連貫
3、參考詞匯：郵資-postage
Dear Mr. Brown,
I have been back, and write this letter to show my thanks. As the exchange student, you make me feel warm. Welcome to my country ,I’ll show you around in turn.
However , there exists a problem that I have left my dictionary at your home. I like it very much , for it was a precious gift from my teacher who comes from the U.S. I guess that my book may stay on your shelf in the bedroom .
Do you mind if you send my dictionary to me? I will pay for the postage and I’ll be very grateful if you show your warmness again.
I’m eager to receive your reply.
Yours,
Li hua
[名師點評]
本文作為信件，首先其格式是正確的。既然是應用文，那麽文章的意圖就要明確表示出來，本文在表達作者寫作意圖的時候，情真意切，用詞委婉而合理。文章不但使用了定語從句，還采用了疑問句，讓句式變化而不呆板。
2007安徽卷試題回放
假如妳是李華，美國壹所友好學校準備與妳們學校***同創辦壹份中學生英文刊物，該校格林先生來信詢問有關情況。請妳給她寫封回信，假如妳是李華，美國壹所友好學校準備與妳們學校***同創辦壹份中學生英文刊物，該校格林先生來信詢問有關情況。請妳給她寫封回信，主要內容如下：
l 表示贊成。 l 提出妳喜歡的欄目。l 簡要說明理由。
註意： 1. 詞數100左右。 2. 新的開頭和結尾已為妳寫好。
3. 適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。 4. 參考欄目：欄目—column
Dear Mr. Green,
I am very excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine together. That sounds great! And I definitely agree with you on that.
Some of the columns which you mentioned in the letter are really my cup of tea. Say, “culture express” gives us a better understanding of the world. Since people from different parts of the world have different values, it’s necessary to learn from each other. This will offer a wonderful chance. Apart from that, “blurt out” is pretty good for Chinese students to learn English idioms and improve oral English. Last but not least, “entertainment” is so cool! The popular singers, actors and celebrities are so catchy and attractive that you absolutely can’t miss it! Teenagers are just fond of the trendy things.
Well, I can’t list more. I really can’t wait to read that magazine!
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
名師點評
這是壹篇滿分作文。由於這篇作文的出現，導致了安徽省該年的英語作文分數普遍偏低。仔細分析了這篇文章，寫的的確是好，很地道的美式英語，壹些詞語的大膽使用，讓人不得不猜測此人或者是家人可能有過國外生活的經歷，否則這麽地道標準的英語，可不是壹朝壹夕所能寫出來的。比如說：my cup of tea, apart from that, oral English, last but not least, celebrities, catchy和trendy的大膽運用，list, can't wait to 簡直是perfect! 況且文章中沒有壹個錯誤，不管是書寫還是語法。英語能夠學到這種程度，不可謂不讓人佩服。
2011高考英語滿分作文賞析
作文題目
假設妳是李華，妳的英國筆友Bob將於九月到妳所在城市的建新華文學校學中文，來信請妳在學校附近為他找壹套住房。請根據圖畫提供的信息，寫信介紹住房的情況，並告知住房面積為25平方米，月租500元。
註意：
1.詞數：100左右：
2.參考詞匯：房租—Tent(n.).
I’m very happy to receive your letter, and I’m glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese here. I have already found a fiat for you. It is on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. Bus No.11 can take you there, and it is one stop before the Chinese School. The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and kitchen. There are a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small fiat, and the rent is 500 yuan per month. Maybe this fiat is not as good as your wish, but I’ll try my best to meet your needs. If it is not suitable enough, write to me and I will look for another better place.
Hope you will come here soon!
All the best!
Yours,
Li Hua
滿分理由
本文格式正確，意思表述完整，行文流暢自然。作者在寫作過程中註意長短句並用，還使用了以 ‘which，’引導的非限定性定語從句，從而使文章層次分明，富於變化，不愧為考場佳作。
Dear Bob,
Welcome to China! You wrote to me to find a place for you.
I have found an apartment on Fangcao Street near Jianxin Chinese School. It is on the third floor and there’re three rooms in it: a bedroom, a kitchen, and a bathroom. There is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair in the bedroom. The house is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan per month.
Also from this house you can get to your school easily. Just take the No.11 bus at the bus-stop in front of the building. It is only one stop. At last, will you please tell me the time you arrive? Then I’U be able to meet you at the airport, see you.
Best wishes !
Yours,
Li Hua
滿分理由
本文格式正確，內容完整，表述清楚，銜接緊密流暢，時態語態使用準確，特別是結尾末段適度的發揮，既充實了內容，又符合邏輯，成為本文與眾不同的亮點。
Dear Bob,
How are you these days?
I’m so glad to know that you’ll come to our city to learn Chinese. You asked me to find a place for you. Now I’ve found one which I think is pretty good. The place is on Fang Cao Street which is near the No.11 bus stop. It’s just one stop away from Jianxin Chinese School.
There are three rooms, a kitchen, a bathroom and a bedroom. Though it is not very big, only 25 square metres, I think it is suitable. By the way, the rent is 500 yuan per month. I hope you’ll like it. If not, I’ll try to find another place for you.
Yours,
Li Hua
滿分理由
本文內在邏輯性很強，由遠及近。由外及內，層次分明，錯落有致。同時讓步狀語從句運用得恰到好處，很出彩，再則結構完整，從開頭的問候語到結尾都很完備。
作文：
Dear Bob,
I’m glad to hear from you.
Welcome to our city in september. I’ve found a suitable house for you.
The house is on Fang Cao Street, not far from the Jianxin Chinese School. If you take the No.11 bus, it is just one stop.
It is a flat on the third floor of a building. It has three rooms, a living-room, a bathroom and a kitchen. You can cook yourself. The mirror, the basin and the bathtub are very convenient for you. In the living-room, there is a bed, a sofa and a desk with chair. The desk is next to the window. It will be good for study. The total size is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan a month.
Will you be satisfied with this flat, or you want another one? Just let me know. I’ll try my best to help you.
Yours,
Li Hua
滿分理由
本文內容詳實，描述具體細膩，用詞適當準確，如“suitable house”、“not far from’’等，另外文中的選擇疑問句也很有新意。