| ： In the past, the environment was very good. The air was blue and the river was clean. People lived in small houses. People went to the city center on foot or by bus. But now the changes have taken place in my hometown.. The lives are becoming better . The environment was not as good as before. The river is not clean. The fish in the river is dead. The lives of the people have improved a lot. People go to the city centre by bus , train or by car. |
| 試題分析：這是壹篇給材料作文，介紹自己家鄉的變化。題目中給出的材料較為齊全。動筆前應根據材料內容組織語言，列出簡單提綱，確定句子的時態，關鍵單詞等問題。註意不要遺漏要點，註意文後要適當談談自己的感受。在寫作時，由於本文涉及過去現在的時間，註意時態與時間狀語的搭配。 點評：此類作為首先要做的就是認真閱讀材料，不能跑題偏題。寫作中註意壹些基礎的寫作常識，不犯低級錯誤。只要平時積累足夠，就壹定能獲得滿意的分數。另外為了應付考試，可以有選擇的背誦壹些範文，這樣應考時就會有法可依。 |