古詩詞大全網 - 成語經典 - 根據下面的提示,寫壹篇100詞左右的題為“Travel”的短文。1.當工作累了時,妳可以旅遊。這樣既可以領略

根據下面的提示,寫壹篇100詞左右的題為“Travel”的短文。1.當工作累了時,妳可以旅遊。這樣既可以領略

Travel is a very good activity. When you’re fed up with your work or study, and when you’re free, you can go to a beautiful place to enjoy the beauty of nature. You can breathe fresh air and make some friends.

But sometimes, it is not a good thing. The weather often changes. You may be caught in the rain and may catch a cold while traveling.

Therefore, you should prepare yourself carefully before the trip. You’d better find a companion so that you can help each other and may avoid accidents.

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點評:本文屬於文字提示較多的提綱作文,動筆前,壹定要認真分析要點,理解要點要表達的含義,不能遺漏要點,跑題偏題。平時除了加強詞匯積累,寫作聯系以外,還可以適當記憶壹些類似的範文,這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。