古詩詞大全網 - 成語查詢 - 5月9日,靖江市人民政府新聞辦公室發布消息:上午10時左右,市自來水公司發現長江水有異味,本著對市民負

5月9日,靖江市人民政府新聞辦公室發布消息:上午10時左右,市自來水公司發現長江水有異味,本著對市民負

Last week, our class had a class meeting on the topic of Cherish Water Resource. All the students took an active part in the discussion and shared their opinions with each other. We think all animals and plants need water to grow and humans can’t live without water.

However, fresh water is becoming less and less. With the development of our society and the increase of population , we need more water. But many people are wasting much water in their daily life. What’s worse, many factories are pouring poisonous water into the rivers, causing great pollution. What should we do to cherish the water resource? We? must stop wasting water from now on,and waste water from factories must be stopped right now. Only by doing so , can we protect our valuable fresh water and live a happy life.

In a word, water is very important to us. Each of us should do our best to cherish water resource so that people in the future will have plenty of water to use.

試題分析:這是壹篇給材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細,我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內容表達出來。動筆前要認真閱讀材料,不可遺漏要點,並適當發揮。根據材料內容可知本文主要是壹般現在時態,要註意時態與時間狀語的搭配及主謂壹致問題。寫作中適當使用連詞,註意上下文聯系緊密,符合邏輯關系。

亮點說明亮點壹:fresh water is becoming less and less. 新鮮的水是越來越少。

亮點二:With the development of our society and the increase of population.用介詞結構短語比較新穎。

亮點三: causing great pollution現在分詞短語做伴隨狀語。