：How Will Our Life Go on without Internet
1. 網路提供給了人們豐富多彩和便捷的生活
2. 很多人開始感覺離開網路寸步難行
3. 妳對網路依賴癥的看法
● 審題概述●?
本文是壹篇論述妳對網路與人們生活關系的文章。第壹段，側重簡述網路給人們生活的多彩、便利。第二段，詳述網路與人們生活的緊密度。第三段，論述對網路依賴的觀點。
範文1：
How Will Our Life Go on without Internet?
If asked whether the Internet is the greatest discovery of the 20th century, my answer would be yes. The Internet has drawn the world closer together, realized countless incredible dreams, and provided modern people with a great many conveniences and a brilliant life.
Today, many people simply feel they cannot live without the Internet. Governments publish their latest policies and decisions online for worldwide recognition. Political campaigns are often done online to gain wider public support. panies and enterprises resort to the Internet for more business opportunities and potential customers home and abroad. Universities and researchers turn to the Internet if they’d seek
international cooperation or funding. mon folks like us also rely on the cyber world in various ways, for munication, entertainment, banking and shopping.
True, the power of the Internet is all pervasive and its many negative effects are already visible. For example, Internet addicts tend to withdraw to their own fantasy world rather than municate with a real person. Children are exposed to online *** ography and violence. Internet frauds are an everyday occurrence. In view of all this, you are advised to use the Internet with wisdom. Keep it at a safe distance and never lose yourself.
◇第壹段思路點評：
綜述網路給人們生活帶來的多彩和便捷。兩個長句足矣。第壹句用if引導的條件句引出“網路”話題，第二句概述網路帶給多彩和便捷的生活。 ◇語言點提示：
has drawn?, realized, and provided此為謂語連動式的運用。 ◇第二段思路點評：
詳述網路與人們生活的緊密關系，先總述，後分述。
◇語言點提示：
resort to借助、訴諸、求助於
◇第三段思路點評：
先陳述人們對網路的依賴，再談對此的看法。
◇語言點提示：
1negative effects副作用、反面作用
2addicts成癮者、依戀者
3fantasy world虛擬世界、虛幻世界
4 *** ography *** 、色情作品
5fraud欺騙、詐騙
範文2：
As a primary source of rmation as well as an efficient means of munication, the Internet offers people a colourful and convenient life. Just by clicking the mouse, we can enjoy a brilliant and easy life that could not be achieved ever before: shopping, making friends, contacting relatives, looking for jobs, downloading music and movies, conducting business deals, and freely airing our opinions.
For its convenience, the Internet has attracted people like magnets and some people even claim that it is indispensable. To them, life can’t go on without it. Every day millions of people spend hours on end surfing the Internet. They are obsessed with it so much so that they forget many other important matters.
As for me, I don’t approve of unrestrained Internet reliance. Although the Internet is a gift of the technological revolution and a blessing of this rmation age, we should never let it control our life. The Internet absolutely doesn’t mean the whole world to us. Instead, we should guard against its negative effects. To those Internet addicts, I would add: “Self-control can make or break your life. With proper use, the Internet serves you; otherwise, it kills you.”
：Craze for Civil Service Examinations
1. 現在有越來越多的大學畢業生報考公務員
2. 引起此現象的原因
3. 妳的看法
● 審題概述●?
本文是壹篇主要論述大學生報考公務員增多的原因和對此看法的文章。第壹段，主要綜述大學生報考公務員增多的現象。第二段，側重分析引起此現象的原因。第三段，重點談妳對此的觀點。
範文
Craze for Civil Service Examinations?
Every year hundreds of thousands of people in China take civil service exams conducted at various levels in the hope of being government employees. Among them, college graduates are a fast-growing force that can’t be ignored. The craze for being a civil servant is not limited to liberal arts majors, as it’s also gaining popularity among science and engineering students.
In the final *** ysis, this growing trend among the youngsters is mainly attributable to two factors – ambitions and forts. On the one hand, many ambitious college graduates view these exams as a springboard to a higher social status, greater power and prestige, on which many of
their other wishes rest. On the other, as being a civil servant generally means a stable ine, enviable healthcare and pension programmes, as well as other forts of life, it’s quite an appealing career option to many people, especially in this age of sluggish world economy.
Personally, the desire to be a government official is beyond reproach, as the nation and the people do need an injection of new blood into the civil service sectors. The fresh-faced college graduates, armed with lofty ideals, new vision, and strong drive, are undoubtedly among the best candidates.
◇第壹段思路點評：
第壹句總述人們蜂擁參加公務員招考，第二句點明大學生是其中的主力軍，第三句再述熱衷於公務員報考的大學生不僅有文科的，還有理工科的。 ◇語言點提示：
liberal arts majors文科專業學生
◇第二段思路點評：
先總述引起大學生熱衷報考公務員的兩點因素，再詳細分述。
◇語言點提示：
1On the one hand?On the other起到銜接上文作用
2is attributable to歸因於
3sluggish world economy衰退的世界經濟
◇第三段思路點評：
重點談對大學生熱衷報考公務員的觀點。
◇語言點提示：
beyond reproach無可厚非
：Enhance Awareness to Guard against Campus Thefts
1. 校園盜竊案件時有發生
2. 物品被盜的原因
3. 學生如何加強防盜意識
這是壹篇論述校園物品被盜和加強防盜意識的文章。第壹段，主要陳述校園盜竊案件發生的情況。第二段，主要分析校園物品被盜的原因。第三段，主要闡述學生怎樣增強防盜意識。
範文
Enhance Awareness to Guard against Campus Thefts?
“If you don’t want to wake up and find you have no pants to wear, you’d better put them on in sleep,” goes a popular joke among students. Obviously, campus thefts have bee increasingly annoying as they occur far more often than before. And it seems that the thieves are less choosy these days, with their targets ranging widely from bikes, cell phones, purses, pre-paid IC cards to sunglasses, bags, and even underwear. In short, anything that worth a dime is likely to be stolen.
What makes students the easy targets? The reasons are not hard to find. But I believe of all these reasons, the lack of anti-theft alertness is the most important. For lack of alertness, the students tend to leave the doors and windows wide open during sleep at noon or at night in summer. For the same reason, they’ll also leave their bikes unlocked before a store or by a road, or forget to take away their personal stuff before they go out of the classroom to make a phone call. These acts undoubtedly have increased their exposure to the light-fingered monsters.
In order to minimize possible losses, the students must stay on guard in the first place, as awareness of the thefts around often makes a big difference. To be more specific, the students should not hide any tempting amount of cash in the dorm. Put it in the bank instead. Besides, do not leave any valuable items unattended. Take them wherever you go. In addition, it’s advisable to develop a neighbourhood watch programme with other students in the dorm and neighbouring dorms.
◇第壹段思路點評：
陳述校園盜竊案件發生的情況
◇語言點提示：
it seems that此句型表示壹種可能性
◇第二段思路點評：
說明被盜原因
◇語言點提示：
1What makes students the easy targets?此句引出下文
2anti-theft alertness防盜意識
3lack of alertness缺乏警惕
4light-fingered小偷小摸的、慣行扒竊的
◇第三段思路點評：
闡述如何加強防盜意識
◇語言點提示：
註意關聯詞語in the first place，Besides，In addition的使用可使行文更富邏輯性。
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