首先，對方還沒有回答，不能用I wished 這樣的過去式，而且妳的回答怎麽可以用you answer,當然要用your answer. 就算語句再優美，如果語法錯誤壹堆，反而是弄巧成拙了
直接的翻譯是：
我喜歡妳, I like you
我在等妳回答, I'm waiting for your answer
我希望妳回答的時候說我也喜歡妳。I hope that you will answer "I like you too".
如果您想詩歌壹點兒，呃，
My heart has fallen for you and I eagerly await for your answer. How much I wish that your answer will be "I have fallen for you, too."
絕對貼切，保證通順。如果還有什麽問題可以找我~