2021年7月1日雅思寫作考試真題
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大作文:同意與否
Maintaining public libraries is a waste of time since computer technology is now replacing their function. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
大作文寫作範文
For centuries libraries are in the service of man; these libraries are the repositories of never-ending knowledge known as books. Some people opine that we can do away with traditional libraries because technology has given us the facility of virtual or online libraries. I, however, believe that even though technology has reduced our need to go to the libraries, our traditional libraries can never become redundant.
With the advent of new technologies in the field of computers and telecommunications, revolutionary changes have taken place in the feld of Library and Information Science. The shape of traditional libraries containing a large number of printed documents is in the process of being transformed into paper-less libraries containing a large number of digitized documents. The facilities offered by networking have not left libraries untouched. Modern libraries are not only digitized but networked also. This has led to the creation of virtual libraries, i.e., libraries without walls through which the user has access to information at any time, anywhere in the world, by using the modern tools of communications, such as computers and Internet facilities.
However, one should keep in mind that a person goes to a library to search and get information from books and sit and study there. The library's ambiance and peaceful and scholarly atmosphere help one concentrate more on one's work and study. Thus, libraries will never become redundant. They will always be there to indicate the presence of a well-read and educated society.
Another important point is that it is very difficult to always read books from the computer monitor. Traditional books can be issued from the library and read in the comfort of your bed. Virtual libraries can be accessed only by those who are computer literate. Access to virtual libraries can be affected by power cuts and network failures. Moreover, in a traditional library, you are guided by the librarians if you need any help in searching for the book.
To put it in a nutshell, I pen down saying that advancement should be welcomed in every field, but the importance of the libraries for their fundamental role cannot be put aside. This tendency will add more crowns of success to the importance of libraries.
雅思寫作細節須知
標點書寫問題
按英文書寫規定,標點應緊挨著它的附著意群進行標註,與另壹個意群要以壹個字符的空格隔開。但是在實際作文中經常發現學生不論什麽標點都會當作壹個單詞來對待,即標點前後都空下空格,結果給人以標點滿天飛的感覺,影響了文章的美感。
書寫過於隨意
每個人都有自己的書寫習慣,但是雅思考試畢竟是要給外國人看的,所以大家如果能夠在書寫習慣上貼近老外,肯定會給人以親切的卷面印象。比如不要書寫得過於密集,以免讓人看不清單詞,影響理解。也不要寫得過於稀疏而讓人無法在eye span 範圍內看到完整的意群,從而影響考官閱讀。字不要寫得太大,也不要太小。盡量不要連寫以免造成l,r,n,m等混淆不清,造成考官閱卷障礙。
寫作格式混亂
英文寫作格式主要有齊頭式和縮進式。通常齊頭式因為頂頭書寫且段與段之間空出壹行,所以會給人以整潔的感覺,也比較推薦大家使用這種格式。縮進式和中文的寫作格式相似,即每壹段的開頭句縮進,但是段落之間沒有空行,所以不是很受歡迎。經常在作文中看到同學們用的是“齊頭式+縮進式”,即段首句縮進+段落之間空行,給人以不倫不類的感覺,同學們壹定要註意。
總結段缺失
很多學生在寫作時因為時間不充裕無法寫出總結段,於是給閱卷者沒完成任務的感覺。建議考生盡量要寫最後的summary,無論是task1還是task2。因為同學們可以利用最後壹段來點題、歸納,這樣可以最大限度地避免因為語言功底不深而導致的文章結構不明晰,說服力不強等問題,即用形式來彌補內容上無法克服的困難。
分段過多或者過少
大家可以設想壹下,當妳拿著壹篇只有壹段的很長的文章時,是不是會有很暈的感覺?尤其是當我們的寫作能力有限,文字表達沒有吸引力時,怎麽能讓考官有耐心看完妳的文章呢?再設想壹下,當妳看的文章分成很多的段落,而妳的論證能力有限,費了半天勁也寫不出幾個句子,會不會每段都給人以流水賬的感覺呢?
如何提升雅思寫作內容
妳讀過多少範文
雅思寫作內容提升第壹問:妳讀過多少範文?有的同學可能從開始備考雅思寫作壹直到考試都沒完整地看過壹篇範文,有的同學可能了解範文的重要性,不但看範文還將範文背誦下來。這其實是利用範文提升雅思寫作的兩個極端,不看範文當然不可以,但背誦範文其實也沒有必要,所以學習範文的時候強調壹個“讀”字。
妳背過多少詞匯和句式
雅思寫作內容提升第二問:妳背過多少詞匯和句式?缺乏積累也是影響寫作內容的提升。如果我們在寫雅思作文的時候經常發現所寫內容不能完美表述自己想表達的意思,或者腦中已經想好內容,提筆卻沒有詞匯句式可用,那就說明大家在寫作方面的原始積累還不夠,建議大家先去背壹些雅思寫作的高頻詞匯、短語和句式,等到有了壹定的原始積累以後再去寫作就會感覺順手許多。 妳是否還在隨心所欲地寫作
雅思寫作內容提升第三問:妳是否還在隨心所欲地寫作?寫作過程中要按照雅思寫作要求,回應題目,減少語法錯誤,保證內容充實語句段落連貫,還要註意寫作字數達標。