| One possible version: On-line friend(s) Recently ,people have had a heated discussion about whether students should make friends on-line. Different people hold different opinions. Some of them agree with the opinion . The reasons are as follows: first, we can make more friends with others on the Internet. Second, We can express our ideas freely. Besides, making friends on line can contribute to learning English. However, others are against the opinion .The reason why they disagree is that they think it is a waste of time to make friends on line and has a bad effect on study. What’s more, students are likely to be cheated on line . Each coin has its two sides .In my opinion, making friends on line is good for us because it is very convenient and can widen our horizon. All the best , Yours， Li Hua |
| 試題分析：這是壹篇議論文，第壹段贊同學生網上交友的人的觀點，第二段是反對學生網上交友觀點，第三段是表述作者自己的觀點。第壹段陳述贊同的理由時作者用了Firstly, Secondly, they can express their feelings Besides,來連接，是文章有層次，並且很流暢。第二段是反對的人的觀點和他們的理由，作者沒有重復第二段的方法而是用了 in addition來過渡。第三段是作者自己的觀點，範文中用In my opinion/ From my point of view來表達自己的觀點，觀點明確，還有自己的令人信服的理由。壹篇好的作文要做到：要點要全，表達要清晰明確，使用短語，句型要準確，註意避免拼寫和語法錯誤，熟練運用好的詞組。例如as follows、 a waste of time get cheated、 As for friendship 和widens our eyes and enriches our knowledge.都用了我們學過的重點短語，另外這篇文章裏的好句型也是亮點，例如：chatting on line is also helpful for our language study. /They say making friends on line is a waste of time, which should be spent more meaningfully/ Only in this way can making online friends be valuable to us.熟練正確的使用這些句型能體現考生的水平，也會給自己的文章加分。 點評：這類作文的寫作方法要註意認真審題，可以分三段寫：贊成；反對；妳的看法。註意過渡性語言的使用。做到：要點要全，表達要清晰明確，使用短語，句型要準確，註意避免拼寫和語法錯誤，熟練運用好的詞組。 |