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The

Mid-Autumn

Festival

The

Mid-Autumn

Festival

falls

on

the

15th

of

the

eighth

month

of

our

Chinese

lunar

calendar.

As

one

of

the

traditional

Chinese

festivals,

it

has

been

enjoying

great

popularity

in

our

country.

Usually,

no

matter

how

far

away

or

how

busy

we

are,

we

will

try

to

come

home

for

the

celebration.

The

moon

that

night

looks

the

brightest

in

the

whole

lunar

month.

What

we

love

most

is

the

time

we

enjoy

the

full

moon

together.

With

the

beautiful

moon

up

in

the

sky,

we

sit

together

and

eat

moon

cakes

and

fruit,

sharing

our

stories.

In

addition

to

these

traditional

activities,

we

have

a

wider

range

of

choices,

such

as

travelling

and

visiting

our

relatives

or

friends.

答案解析試題分析:本題是提綱類作文,文體是說明文。話題是中秋節,材料已給出,考生應該不難理解寫作內容和寫作目的,且文章的題目和首句已給出,關鍵在於要點要全面包括,不能有遺漏和省略。同時註意謀篇布局的順序,運用合適的連接詞連接全文,同時選擇高級的詞匯和語法項目讓文章更有文采。審題時註意本文使用壹般過去時,描述要盡量選擇簡潔的語言,運用合適的語法規則和詞匯把各要點都準確表述出。難點在於選擇詞匯和句型,可以靈活運用高級詞匯和固定短語準確表述。

亮點說明As

one

of

the

traditional

Chinese

festivals,

it

has

been

enjoying

great

popularity

in

our

country.

Usually,

no

matter

how

far

away

or

how

busy

we

are,

we

will

try

to

come

home

for

the

celebration.這句話用了讓步狀語從句,

What

we

love

most

is

the

time

we

enjoy

the

full

moon

together.

這句話用了主語從句,With

the

beautiful

moon

up

in

the

sky,

we

sit

together

and

eat

moon

cakes

and

fruit,

sharing

our

stories.

這句話用了現在分詞做伴隨狀語,In

addition

to

these

traditional

activities,

we

have

a

wider

range

of

choices,

such

as

travelling

and

visiting

our

relatives

or

friends.這句話用了in

addition

to除了,使文章更加連貫。

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