The
Mid-Autumn
Festival
The
Mid-Autumn
Festival
falls
on
the
15th
of
the
eighth
month
of
our
Chinese
lunar
calendar.
As
one
of
the
traditional
Chinese
festivals,
it
has
been
enjoying
great
popularity
in
our
country.
Usually,
no
matter
how
far
away
or
how
busy
we
are,
we
will
try
to
come
home
for
the
celebration.
The
moon
that
night
looks
the
brightest
in
the
whole
lunar
month.
What
we
love
most
is
the
time
we
enjoy
the
full
moon
together.
With
the
beautiful
moon
up
in
the
sky,
we
sit
together
and
eat
moon
cakes
and
fruit,
sharing
our
stories.
In
addition
to
these
traditional
activities,
we
have
a
wider
range
of
choices,
such
as
travelling
and
visiting
our
relatives
or
friends.
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亮點說明As
one
of
the
traditional
Chinese
festivals,
it
has
been
enjoying
great
popularity
in
our
country.
Usually,
no
matter
how
far
away
or
how
busy
we
are,
we
will
try
to
come
home
for
the
celebration.這句話用了讓步狀語從句,
What
we
love
most
is
the
time
we
enjoy
the
full
moon
together.
這句話用了主語從句,With
the
beautiful
moon
up
in
the
sky,
we
sit
together
and
eat
moon
cakes
and
fruit,
sharing
our
stories.
這句話用了現在分詞做伴隨狀語,In
addition
to
these
traditional
activities,
we
have
a
wider
range
of
choices,
such
as
travelling
and
visiting
our
relatives
or
friends.這句話用了in
addition
to除了,使文章更加連貫。
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