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I have a friend. Her name is Gong Haijuan. She is a clever girl. She is kind to others. She has good grades in all subjects. She often comes first or second in the exam. She is like a boy. She is brave and helpful.?
我有壹個朋友。她叫龔海娟。她是壹個聰明的女孩。她對別人很好。她各科成績都很好。她經常在考試中獲得第壹或第二名。她像個男孩。她既勇敢又樂於助人。
One day, her friend’s keys fell into the pool. She jumped into the pool and found the keys. We all admire her. The owner of the keys master was grateful for her help. But she said, “We are classmates. We should help each other.” Sometimes when I have some hard questions, she will help me.
壹天，她朋友的鑰匙掉進了遊泳池。她跳進遊泳池，找到了鑰匙。我們都欽佩她。鑰匙主人很感激她的幫助。但她說:“我們是同學。我們應該互相幫助。”有時候我有壹些很難的問題，她會幫我。
She is clever and cheerful. She can organize class activities and wall paper. Her wall paper won the first prize last term.
她聰明開朗。她可以組織班級活動和墻紙。她的墻紙上個學期獲得了壹等獎。
She is strong and good at sports. She likes playing volleyball and football. Sometimes she plays basketball with boys. The sports meeting is coming. She wants to get a good prize for class.
她很強壯，擅長運動。她喜歡打排球和踢足球。有時她和男孩壹起打籃球。運動會就要到了。她想在課堂上獲得好成績。
She is a nice girl. I think she can get better.
她是個好女孩，我想她會好起來的。