for them prepares soem beautiful gifts - prepared some beautiful gifts for them
tell to me - tell me
in their mind a deep impression - a deep impression in their mind
wave to you goodbye - wave goodbye to you / wave you goodbye
talk - talking
has - is
ON the door has - On the door there is
looked - looked at
gave to - gave
always have manhy cars run - are always filled with moving cars
When I'll grow up,I'm going to do ----When I grow up,
what I want do.I'm going to move ----what I want to do.
to somewhere interesting.Paris ---somewhere interesting.Paris
sound like a city that I could enjoy. ---sounds like a city that I could enjoy.
They have a lots of fashion show there. --They have a lot of fashion show there. (其實they have也是錯的,因為指代的是Paris)
I want to be a art editor for a fashion show.--I want to be an art editor for a fashion show.
2. Following 改成Follow
4. You must do everything you can to help them.
5. see改成sees
6. which 改成that（這個有點不確定）
7. I think perhaps I was too tired, I stood up, and was going to sleep.
8. watch 改成watching
9.remained 改成remaining
10. ran about again改成about to run again
You (must) (give) your library book back (on time)
on time按時和in time及時，我覺得都可以用，但是return...back沒有這種用法
(Would) you (please) (not do) it (again)?
I (will) (be) back (in) (o weeks).
a用於輔音音素開頭的單詞前，an用於元音音素（不是元音字母）開頭的單詞前。
註意是音素，即讀音，不是字母。
h的讀音是/ei/開頭的，所以原句中的a要改成an.
when did you have your lunch?when是不能對完成時提問的。(不是很肯定。)
how long have you been in beijing.to只表示去，不能表示在。
don't get off the bus until it ss.until，後面跟壹般時態表將來。
my uncle left shanghai since fifty years ago.有了ago這個詞表過去，所以不用完成時。
how long ago did you s *** oking.同理，有了ago，就用壹般過去時。
they told the story as if it had happened to them.前面told是過去時了，那麽這個story是在之前發生的事，所以用had過去完成時
My parents are fond for going to art galleries and often take my with them, so I've developing an interest in art. 這句話有三個錯誤，先把for改為of,然後把my改為me,最後把developing改為developedI love that picture of six horse.這裏的horse應該是復數，改為horses
They look such alive that I want to say more about them.把such改為so
I can tell with the differences aording to the style.把with去掉，tell本身就有“辨別”的意思
I real like him very much.把real改為really,這裏需要的是壹個副詞
He is extraordinary artist but he has left us so many wondeful works.這句話有兩處錯誤，先在extraordinary前插入壹個不定冠詞"an"，然後這句話的前後邏輯關系詞應該是and而不是but
I admired him very much.這句話的時態應該是壹般現在時，所以改為admire