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Mountain is changing. Changes in the water. People change, too. The world is changing all the time. My hometown is no exception. Today I will tell you about the changes in my hometown.
Roads in my hometown were dirt roads and potholes. Sunny days are fine, but rainy days the roads are full of puddles and muddy. If you walk on it, you will slip and get covered in mud, and you will look like a mud monkey.
With the construction of the new countryside in recent years, the muddy dirt road has become a smooth concrete road. Go up very comfortable, far look cement road is like a floating ribbon, winding into the distance.
On both sides of the road are paddy fields, the breeze blowing, like rice nodding to the guests in the distance. Pedestrians on the road also more up, in the evening the children and their parents came to the road, they walk, chat, very happy.
譯文：山在變。水在變。人也在變。大千世界，每時每刻都在發生變化。我的家鄉也不例外。今天我就給大家講壹講我家鄉的變化。
以前家鄉的路都是土路，坑坑窪窪。晴天還好，可是到了雨天路面上到處都是水坑，而且泥濘不堪。走在上面深壹腳淺壹腳的，壹不留神就會滑倒，弄得滿身都是泥巴，這時候妳看上去就活像壹只泥猴。
這幾年隨著新農村的建設，原來那條泥濘的土路變成了平坦的水泥路。走上去舒服極了，遠遠看去水泥路就像壹條飄動的絲帶，蜿蜒著伸向遠方。
路兩旁是成片的稻田，微風吹過，稻子像在向遠方的客人點頭致意。路上的行人也多了起來，到了傍晚小朋友們和他們的爸爸媽媽陸陸續續來到路上，他們壹邊散步，壹邊聊天，開心極了。