I am writing in response to your advertisement for a temporary position as a waiter. I am a 17-year-old student of Senior Two in a middle school. I will be able to work during July and August.
I worked as a waiter at a McDonald's during the last summer vacation. From my working experience, I learned a lot. I am now good at using the computer. Also, I enjoy working with people and I am interested in the catering service.
I would be very grateful if you could send me more information about the position available.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
試題分析：這是壹封求職信，所以要用第壹人稱來寫。寫作時不能只是生硬的逐條翻譯，壹定根據內容要點適當發揮。需要註意不要偏離文章中心，寫作時註意準確運用時態，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，壹定要契合給出的開頭，不能出現文章脫節問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要註意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。同時註意題目要求字數，100詞左右。
點評：本文屬於書信類作文，動筆前，壹定要認真分析要點，理解要點要表達的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題。平時除了加強詞匯積累，寫作聯系以外，還可以適當記憶壹些類似的範文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。