壹、書信寫作考察的結構
①日期,寫信人應將寫信日期(年,月,日)放在書信正文的右上角,如Jan. 30th, 2010.
提醒:考研書信寫作沒有要求考生必須寫時間,如果沒有把握自己的時間書寫格式是正確的,建議考生不要寫,以免出錯反而扣分。
②稱呼,稱呼是寫信人對收信人的稱謂,稱呼可以根據收信人的性別,職務,婚姻狀況,姓名等個人信息來寫,如:Mr. Williams, Mrs. Bush, Professor Li, Dr. Smith, Dear Mum and Dad
如果寫信人不清楚收信人的具體姓名,職務等情況,可以寫:Dear Sir or Madam, To whom it may concern.
③正文,正文是書信的主要部分,在稱呼下方隔壹或兩行處開始。考生寫正文時,要分層次進行。書信正文通常由引言,展開段和結尾三個層次組成。
?引言,引言表明寫信人的寫信目的和寫信背景,壹般僅限於壹段,壹兩句話即可。
提醒:此處考生容易犯壹個錯誤:照抄題目的表達,甚至原句,這是壹個嚴重的錯誤,在閱卷過程至少會扣到2分,希望廣大考生要註意。
?展開段,展開段內容應詳實,具體。可以分為若幹段來寫,每壹段圍繞壹個主題展開。
提醒:提醒廣大考生,題幹中的要點必須全部包含,考生若是在漏掉壹個要點(壹般小作文有3個要點)會至少扣掉3分。
?結尾,結尾部分通常比引言部分短,使用壹兩句話表達壹下希望或祝願。
④結束語,結束語是寫信人對收信人的謙稱,寫在正文下面二至三行處。公務等較正式的信件多采用Yours sincerely, Sincerely yours, Yours faithfully, Yours truly等;私人信件,多采用Yours, With love, Yours affectionately等。
⑤簽名,簽名應寫在結束語的下面。
二、主體段語言的操作
書信按照指令邊想邊寫。主體第壹段壹句話,開門見山,提出寫信的目的,表明信的性質:是投訴信還是申請信還是請求信?我為什麽要寫這封信?常用句式包括:
I am writing to complain about…
I am writing to thank…for…/express my gratitude for…
I am writing to ask for…
I am writing to apply for…
正文第二段,100個字左右,8、9句話。
此段寫作的中心任務是把題目中的提綱進行擴展。如果有3條提綱,可以每壹條提綱擴充3句。怎麽樣擴充,主要是發揮點小小的想象力,有兩種思路,壹是將上義拆分成為若幹下義,二是把壹件事情說得更為形象具體。比如第壹條指令,題目裏面說是books,可以細化為各種各樣的書,這就是下義拆分法。還可以具體描寫壹下這些書是什麽樣子的。同樣第二個指令裏面的methods of payment,和第三個指令裏面的time and way of delivery都可以采用這兩種方法進行擴展。
結尾,壹般為禮貌性的套話,壹般都是焦急等待著您的回信I am looking forward to your reply足以,或者I would appreciate it if you could send a replay at your earliest convenience也行。
以下為書信寫作中常用的經典句型參考,希望大家在寫作中活學活用。
常用起首語
1) I am much pleased to inform you that……。
2) I wish to apply for the teaching position you are offering.
3) Your kind letter of November 22th arrived this morning.
4) In reply to your letter dated July 4, I want to say…
5) Thank you for your letter dated Dec.22, 2000.
6) Many thanks for your letter of Sept.5,1997.
7) A thousand thanks for your kind letter of June 5,1997.
8) Your letter which arrived this morning gave me great comfort.
9) Thank you very much for your letter of August 2 and the gift you sent me on Christmas Eve.
10) First of all,I must thank you for your kind assistance and high attention to me .
11) With great delight I learn from your letter of this Sunday that…
12) I am too excited and delighted at your good news.
13) I am very obliged to you for your warm congratulations.…
常用結束語
1) Looking forward to your early reply
2) Hoping to hear from you soon
3) I hope to hear from you very soon.
4) We look forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.
5) Your early reply will be highly appreciated.
6) I hope everything will be well with you.
7) Please let us know if you want more information.
8) I wish you very success in the coming year.
9) Please remember me to your family.
10) With best regards to your family.
11) All the best.
12) With love and good wishes.
求職申請信常用句型
1. In reply to your advertisement in ~,I respectfully offer my services for the situation.
2. With reference to your advertisement in ~ for a / an ~,I offer myself for the post.
3. Please consider me an applicant for the position which you advertised in ~.
4. Having noticed the enclosed advertisement in ~,I wish to apply for the position referred to.
5. In answer to your advertisement in ~ for a ~,I wish to tender my services.
6. Your advertisement for a ~ in ~ has interested me. I feel I can fill that position.
7. Shall you need an experienced ~ for your ~ next SUMMER?
8. I have been for over five years in the employment of a / an ~ company
9. I have been in the business for the last ~ years, and worked as the director of the…department.
10. I've had ~ years' experience with a company as a ~.
11. For the last ~ years, I have been and still am a / an ~.
12. I'm ~ years of age, female / male, and have had ~ years' experience in a limited company's ~ office
13. I should be very glad to have a personal interview and can furnish references if desired.
14. If you desire an interview, I shall be most happy to call in person, on any day and at any time you may appoint.
15. Should you think favorably of my application, kindly grant me an interview.
16. I trust that you'll give this application your favorable consideration.
17. Should you give me a trial, I‘ll do my utmost to afford you every satisfaction.
申訴信常用句型
1. I am sorry to say that we are greatly inconvenienced by the fact that ~.
2. I am writing this letter to complain about ~.
3. I really must complain about the quality of the ~ I recently got from your company.
4. You seem to have supplied us with a product that falls far below the standard we expect.
5. The ~ I ordered from your store arrived broken. Obviously, no packing had been placed in the box before it was sent from the warehouse.
6. It is now over ~ since we made the above order with you, but the ~ we need badly now haven't arrived yet.
7. The product I purchased from you ~ proved to be quite a disappointment. Although it looks exactly the same as the one I saw in your commercial, it actually does not perform the same way.
8. As I have no interest in receiving a replacement, I am returning the product to you and demand that a full refund be made to me.
9. I'd appreciate it very much if you refund the money I have paid for it.
10. We would appreciate it if you would arrange for the replacement of the damaged items.
感謝信常用句式參考:
1. Let me tell you how much I liked / appreciated / enjoyed…
2. I want you to know how much we / I appreciate…
3. We appreciate your taking time to…
4. I don‘t know how I would have managed without your help
5. I hope I can return the favor someday
6. Do let me know if I can ever return the favor